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    Post  Bennie Fri Feb 27, 2009 7:13 pm

    On a far off planet, In a universe parellel to our own. There is a planet that has two suns, This eternally light planet is home to a man Shocked. His name is pirat he went on many jounreys through life, he battled many foes, saved many towns and citys from evil, He was the greatest fighter the planet had ever seen, his speed was unmatchable, his strength inhuman.
    Nothing could prepare pirat for the adventure that awaited him, he was traveling the seas to find a new adventure, a new battle. He wanted something to challenge him, he felt that he had overcome all challenges to easy, he was hungry for a fight that would push his limits.
    He found a what looked like an unmapped island, he went to explore for hidden treasures or even cizilitation, as he got closer he saw smoke coming out of the trees on the coast, he thought someone might be in trouble and traveled faster to see what was happening.
    He was greated by the sight of something he had never seen before, It stood at atleast 7ft tall, built like a house, yet he didnt worry about what he could see, something was telling him it was not hostile, he contined to get closer to the island.
    "Ahoy There!!" Shouted pirat
    "Hello" replied the mysterious figure.
    pirat docked his ship and began to walk over to the figure, he soon realised this was no human, but it was infact an alien.
    "Who might you be? and where are you from?" pirat asked.
    "I am alien, i am from planet flower" alien answered.
    pirat confused, unknowing that there were other life forms in the universe other than his own planet, began to question the
    alien about why he is here.
    "I was in search of help, my planet is in grave danger, we we're invaded by cat there numbers far outnumber our own forces, we are not a violent species, we live for peace and order within our world, we experienced no crime, no war, then they came, and it all began to change, riots, fights, war, murder. It was horrible, thoese of us who could escape did into a far part of the desert, wee set up a new home in a deep cave, away from where they will find us. They use our neighbouring planet the monkey as slaves, to build them the planet the way they wish to use it." alien explained, while a tear grew in his eye Sad.
    pirat part angry, part curious, and slightly confused scratch offered his help to alien and his planet, he told alien of many of his adventures, many of his battles.
    alien was Shocked that one man could do all this alone, he agreed to take pirat to his home planet flower to try help lead what resistance they had gained over the past 2 years.
    alien suddenly looked ill pale
    "My ship, it crashed here, im not sure what i can do with it" alien said.
    "Tell me what you need, we shall find it together!" pirat replied happily.


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    Post  Agnes Fri Feb 27, 2009 8:01 pm

    That was beautiful Bennie, -tears- continue continue!!

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    Post  Bennie Sat Feb 28, 2009 6:03 am

    Once pirat and alien were on planet flower ; pirat saw thousands of monkey slaves working to build pyramids and shopping centres pirat was very pale feeling and had to do something fast! alien refused and told him they need a plan, pirat didnt like this and tried to fight the cat army. pirat fought for hours and hours to realise that there was just to many cat he retreated injured and sore. alien who had been watching the events healed pirat with his magic E.T like power. pirat was scratch but wasnt to surprised that the alien had unhuman powers.

    alien began to explain that there is a resistance, an underground group of monkey rebel cat and other alien all making plans on how to end this once and forall. pirat immediatly agreed to help, they traveled acros thevast desert wastelands of planet flower so that the elephant spaceship wouldnt be spotted by satalite. The journey took weeks; it was a far distance and alien lucky had brought supplies pirat still was sore from battle although alien had healed him; his pride was damaged, he had never lost a battle. alien spent time being his friend something pirat never really had before and they spent along time learning things about eachother.

    They finally reached the rebellion headquarters and pirat was impressed by the amount of cat monkey and alien there was waiting for them. they all began to tell pirat of theplans they already had, and pirat with his experience helped change and alter certian aspects, they spent more weeks constantly study it began to test each of thier endurance it was a long process they spent many days scratch , confused and Suspect

    pirat eventually was happy with what they had study and believed he could now go back, and fight the army one more time. pirat Knew before trying to take down thier god albino he would have to weaken thier forces, he trained each member of the rebellion to fight armed and unarmed combat, and in thier mass numbers, with new recruits they had gathered over the past weeks, an equally large army of monkey cat alien began to march, as they marched, the found a desolated collany of pig that had been livivng on the planet flower unnoticed and unkowning of what was happening, pirat instantly realised they were warrior pig and began to make diplomatic relations. They spent 5 nights here trying hard to make the pig agree to join them in battle.



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    Post  Bennie Sun Mar 01, 2009 2:32 pm

    scratch geek jocolor


    Hahahahahah, i said there'd be more, but not yet =P
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    Post  Agnes Sun Mar 01, 2009 10:22 pm

    -waits- flower flower flower
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    Post  Bennie Sun Mar 08, 2009 7:44 am

    Part 1 has been edited.
    Part 2 will be done soon.
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    Post  Agnes Sat Mar 14, 2009 3:40 pm

    i am the cat master!


    awwww the end of chap 1 counds soo cheesy xD

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